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Poem no. 171, 172, 173

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To be or not to be in Blackness on Sea

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To be or not to be in Blackness on Sea


(Elsinore was set in Blackness Castle for scenes

in Franco Zeffirelli’s film of ‘Hamlet’)



You brown and mottled lobsters all,

come crawl into my Scottish parlour creel,

you’ll find, alas, there’s no way out

until you’re hauled aboard a boat

and plopped into a hotter pot,

where you’ll turn red and, sadly, dead.


The Lobster Pot’s a goodly prison,

you’ll stroll into the parlour, baited well

with burgers, beer and twice fried chips,

and, once inside and soused, it’s hard to leave

until your designated driver hauls you out

and puts you, like a sticky toffee pud, to bed.


Hamlet would choose ‘to be’ in Blackness on Sea,

if there is steak and lobster still for tea!




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Wee Creel Clerihew

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Blackness on Sea

Is remarkably wee

Aside from the castle, one braw thing it's got

Is a pub with good food called 'The Lobster Pot'.



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Lobster Pot Limerick

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In Blackness on Sea, in a creel,

A broon labster wus no feelin weel,

Noo he's in a hot spot

At the auld 'Lobster Pot'

Wi a steak in a surf an turf deal.

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