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Poem no. 221

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Blackness Castle, Blackness on Sea


We have come so that my sons can touch history

hewn and placed by human hands

and gain a sense of smallness,

a sense of place, different than the wide landscapes

of their American home. This: narrow village, this: edge

of Scotland, where a castle juts into sea—

we explore the stone ship bastion, stern—

and yet with sun, with wind

catching fog and I ask my sons: how old?

How old? Make them repeat the year.

This castle more than twice

the age of our entire raucous nation.

Aren’t we silly, I want to say,

and ridiculous and frighteningly brutal

and look at the beauty

of it anyway—how stone might measure

ambition, deceit, triumphs—

but because the sky here

almost always looks like rain,

soon enough, we break for respite,

lunch—a cozy table at The Lobster Pot.

A waitress with ruby lips

and Marilyn hair brings me whiskey

doused in coffee and her light, her kindness

matches stone by stone the castle’s stalwart

bravado of brave in this corner of the world

where we rest and take victual—I am here,

she says, without saying

and it’s just what I’ve been trying to say

to my sons since their arrival

on this wide planet: Oh, my loves—

my dearests—look, listen—see?

You are here.

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