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Poem no. 265

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"Its just a wee toon "

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if this toon could talk , it would tell you some tales

Of romans , tall ships in the harbour

Not forgetting the whales

Wi it's pier and it's castle and braw promenade

The victorians loved it , so did the Bard


The castle lies empty , except for the ghosts

Of past lords , ladies , soldiers and french prisoners of war

And now we visit " BlacKness on sea " and can only imagine what has gone on before

Blackness castle , "The ship that never sailed "

Sits proudly on the river forth

A ship not of wood , but built of fine stone

Lord Crichton who built it , once called it his home

Oliver Cromwell battered it's walls

The sounds of his cannons resound in the halls


It's pointed bow protrudes to the river

The square stern sits on the land

And next to the castle , wains play in the sand

A once thriving port lies quiet and quaint

Except for the pub that sits on the square

Whaur the music and laughter can be heard from afar , The wee lobster pot wi a nice friendly bar

Whaur the tales of Blackness are carried down thru' the years

The stories of great times , and sorrow and fears

Famed for it's seafood straight from the forth ,and all it's fine eats or a nice plate of broth

A historical toon , well worth a visit

To visit the castle or walk on the shore

A drink in the pub , a chat wi the locals

It's not just a wee toon , it's a hundred times more

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