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Poem No. 3

Updated: Mar 18, 2022


A table in the corner for one:

As the bell chimes eleven, on the eleventh day of the eleventh month

He sits alone in the corner of the cosy little pub

Nestled in the shadow of the ship that never sailed

The Lobster Pot gives refuge to the old man, a mariner, a hero never hailed


A life at sea spent battling the waves

Today he drinks a toast to all his friends and comrades now in their graves

He remembers the times, the War, the terror

But then he smiles, thinking about all the good times together


He sips at his pint and gazes out into space

Looking at the Forth and the Ochills, the open log fire gently stroking his face

He’s caught deep in thought as he sits and he thinks

About everything and nothing, and takes another drink


He feels at home in Blackness on Sea

A quiet little village where horses run playfully on land and on sea

Its windy outside and he catches a glance

Of the true magic of nature as he falls into a trance..


‘What a magnificent sight

Seeing the white horses run

Over the top of the ocean

Glistening in the sun

The stronger the wind

The more horses appear

Galloping faster and faster

Crashing into the pier


Herd upon herd

For as far as can see

Majestic wild creatures

Dancing and running free


Untamed and unreadable

A very powerful force

Their loud deep roaring

Warning not to get close’..

His mind jumps back to a thought he had before

Looking out to Inchgarvie Island from the sanctuary of the shore..


‘Peering through the eerie, calm, still, misty morning

The rocky island anchored directly under the red steel giant, a hazard without a

warning

Centred in the Firth of Forth, a spectacle and a mystery

Close but distant from both towns on either side, an island steeped in history

Close as it is within eye sight, distant as it is far removed from the lively, inhabited,

lit hubs of civilisation

Grey and dark, rocky, rugged and jagged; capturing the imagination

Lonely, dead and still

How many stories this island would have to tell

How many soldiers it has was home to during the wars

How many bodies it has had hit its shores’..


He brings himself back to where he is at the present

Focusing on the intricacies of the pub which he finds to be pleasant

He draws himself to the paintings which create the atmosphere

Smiling gently as he finishes his beer


He’s not there to make friends nor there to tell stories

He’s not there to drink all day nor there because he’s lonely

He’s there because its peaceful, somewhere he can reflect

Somewhere he can look out the window and pay his respects


The old man, the mariner stands up tall

Puts on his coat that he hung up on the wall

He nods to the bar tender and heads for the door

Steps out into the darkness and finds himself alone once more


But he’s not sad that he’s alone as he’s had the company of others

He’s had the pleasure of sitting at the table he once shared with his brothers

He felt their presence as he sat there today

He’s seen his friends faces kept alive in the paintings hung up on display


As he walks off into the bitterness of the cold November night

He takes once last look across the water to the distant flickering lights

Though he’s not sad, he still sheds a tear

He asks himself the question ‘will I be here this time next year’.

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